Just, life made-happily want I
piss of made life a living is who nobody am I
them trouble I, me trouble they
shit of full are lives whose people known have I
care I should Earth on why
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1 month ago
Just, life made-happily want I
piss of made life a living is who nobody am I
them trouble I, me trouble they
shit of full are lives whose people known have I
care I should Earth on why
Labels: Poetry
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23 comments:
errr.... (o_0;;
najmie: nape camtu? did u read it backwards?
baca ur title tiba2 terigt benjamin button.tibe2 je..LOL
anisizaty: i am benjamin button:P
a bit awkward to read..
this remind me of reading a jawi/arabic writing...haha.. how unique..
but man, this piece really express what i'm feeling now, living a life made of piss, you hit the bull's eye.
i find it weird..
but then I remembered, u told me u were weird!.. hahaha.. (^^,)
Here's my backwards poem for you:
Friday is tomorrow, luckily
boy pretty a use could, too, I
girl pretty a find go to need you
buddy, up cheer
niji: well, you're not alone in this world:P
najmie: u sure i said weird? i thought i said uniqueXD
I'm no Picasso: wow, u really see through me. thanks:)
next entry shud be downwards or upwards
kl citizen: am trying:P
hoho. at first i didnt notice yr title.
didnt get the meaning at all :P
a life made of piss would just stink..
hancing gila..
haha
sofia: hehe :P
anak pak man: tu la pasal.haha.
the most weird entry that i ever read, sir .
ina: life would be boring if everything is so normal, wouldn't it?:P
and life would be really sucks if everything is weird, sir.
ina: and that's why i didn't make everything weird, girl:)
yea, right. you only made this entry weird and that's it !
ina: did u read the poem backwards? it's not that weird. and don't speak as if i make ALL of my entries weird. if u think they are too weird, then what can i do? i'm not forcing anybody to read.
p/s: no offense, but why do u sound so tensed up? u got problems or something?if u do have some sorts of internal problems, deal with them immediately. seek for advice or something. please don't bring it here. and forgive me if i misinterpret ur comment and intonation..okay? peace:)
I like bringing out the weirdness in me once in a while ...Once In A While lorrr!
Have a nice laugh and that's it!
Until next time ...
precious: hehe, okay:)
the writer is having a down sindrom.
heheh, chill2, cheer up emo kid! ;D
n: kenape mesti down syndrome?? -_-"
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