FLOATING IN-BETWEEN

Today I came to you
with a smile or two
but you passed me through
with the invisibility of you

I turned around and said
“Don’t act like I’m dead!”
you certainly made me sad
when you ignored me like that

I ran towards you and asked why
you didn’t say and started to cry
then you looked up high in the sky
and wished the tears would come to dry

I tried so hard but failed to understand
what was there for me to comprehend
then a man came and said while holding your hand
“He’s no more, will you rise and stand?”

17 comments:

miss AIN June 4, 2009 at 12:49 PM  

expect d unexpected...
try 2accept d possible thingy to hpn..or else u'll b in troble..=))

Igniz June 4, 2009 at 1:20 PM  

Ain: yup:]

Ina Bendtner June 4, 2009 at 2:16 PM  

then a man came and said while holding your hand.

ok part nie kureng paham siket. that man is not you, right?

btw, just confuse, the girl had made you sad, then why she wishes to stop crying? she is not supposed to cry kan?
hehe ;)

sharpie sHa June 4, 2009 at 2:43 PM  

first Ina, now you

dear Lord, summertime ni time utk berpoetic ker?





sgt jealous hokee
I certainly have no talent for poem, bleugh

n June 4, 2009 at 2:55 PM  

women are complicated.

men are too simple.

BaBbliNg BaR0nNESs June 4, 2009 at 4:05 PM  

Salam

if that 'someone' is destined 4 a person
Then that 'someone' will one day, come to you
if not
embrace new experiences, possibilities
and u'll become stronger by day :)

aiMo0o June 4, 2009 at 4:29 PM  

Love every word of it.. nice work !

Igniz June 4, 2009 at 4:35 PM  

EVERYONE: I love all of your sincere comments..i appreciate all of it:)

But did anyone realize that 'I' in the poem is dead? That's why the girl didn't respond to him, that's why she cried, that's why another man said "He's no more, will you rise and stand?"..and that 'I' hasn't realized that he's dead..heehee..:P

aiMo0o June 4, 2009 at 4:48 PM  

wooooo... very deep..
Can a person who is still alive consider themselves dead just bcoz they feel hopeless or heartbroken?

Igniz June 4, 2009 at 4:52 PM  

aimooo: that one I'm not sure..i think it depends on the person..but in this poem, the 'I' is really dead. i mean, REAL dead, not alive anymore. heehee:)

Ina Bendtner June 4, 2009 at 4:57 PM  

sharpie-agaknye lah kot sbb cuti nie boring giler (this week full of extra classes) :D

igniz-ohh, baru pehem// inalillah, mati sudah 'I' itu :P

Igniz June 4, 2009 at 5:01 PM  

Ina & Sha: daripada meluahkan kebosanan dgn membunuh, baik kita menulis, kan? kan?(comparison yg extreme)XD

l e n a June 4, 2009 at 6:17 PM  

owh, i agree with aimooo..that is deep. kinda reminds you of the 6th sense though, doesn't it?

Igniz June 4, 2009 at 6:26 PM  

iena: yes, the sixth sense..the first horror movie that I watched alone at home, at midnight, 12.30 am. huhuhuhu..

miEz haNeM June 5, 2009 at 11:55 AM  

its undefined!

wunny cool sajer June 5, 2009 at 12:36 PM  

haha
biase kot cmtu.
kucen kwn sy pondan ouh.
;]

Igniz June 5, 2009 at 4:26 PM  

hanem: perhaps:)

wunny: eh, cik wunny salah tempat ni..heeheeheeheeheehXD

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